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My Insane Ramblings.
i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
Does she have it???? dun dun dun!!!
Ok, thank you nejiha for comenting....i'm still kinda iritaded that no one ever coments... and again i really do APRICIATE your advise winery!!!!!! heart i'm so sorry that evreyone's being stubborn and not commenting...i only need 2 ppl to comment before i unbend my pride and write more!!!!! crying

ok, i really like the ideas thast winery had in her head and ended up typing down! biggrin so as promised i will follow you pointing finger! *sorry i was puking this morning...i seem tto be in a weird mood at the moment eek *

wahmbulance wahmbulance Susan was asleep when the docter came i to tell her. of course the dunderhead didn't wake her up, NOOOo....simply set the stupid file down and walked out. her mom and dad were staring at her when she woke up. Of course she had absolutly no idea why....
" OH SUSAN!!!! MY BABYYY!!!!" that was her mom, screaming and forcing 'Her baby' into a hug. Susan hated this, the fact the she would do the same thing if she acedentally sewed her finger to a giant cheak for a million dollars....she would do the EXACT same thing. it drove susan up the wall.
" Mother! you smothering me! now let me GO!!!!"That was the typical line that usually made her mther let go. She wanted to be a 'good mother' and 'do things right'. this time Susan's mom didn't let go. AND her father didn't interfere, he simply sat there staring in shock.
Susan knew something was wrong. wahmbulance wahmbulance

ok, i'm interupting this right here mostly because i just have to laugh...in fact right now i'm howling with laughter (at least ont he inside...if i started cracking up right now my own mother might think i had a fever...XD) lmfao

anyway, continue please...and yes...i do make this up on the spot... xp

wahmbulance wahmbulance "I have...what?" Susans quiet voice seemed to echo off the walls. in hind sight she knew it was just shock...but still she didn't like the quaver in her voice.

her mother had finally calmed down and was now trembling in a chair with Susan's father huging her. it was her dad who was talking to her. After all her mother was shaking so hard she lost the ability to speak.

" I'm sorry sweety, the reporrts all saw you have it...but only just. it doesn't seem to be bad...the docters saw they should be able to fix it!" Susan knew that Her father was absolutly horrified.
After all, The babbons with certificats said that his baby had the Hox deisease that the news was flaunting (and you were wondering where Susan got it wernt you?)
Except, Susan wasn't laughing... because this was real. wahmbulance wahmbulance

ok thats enough for today...it's starting to get a little shaky...


ANY WAY!!! HERE IS A THING THAT I WANT TO SCREAM AT THE ONE'S WHO ARE NOT COMMENTING!!!! IF YOU COMMENT I WILL EITHER SEND YOU A PM OR A PROFILE COMMENT THAT TELLS YOU WHEN I UPDATE!!!!! I CANNOT DO THAT IF I HAVE NO IDEA WHO YOU ARE!!! AND AS ALWASE I WILL NOT UPDATE UNTILL I HAVE 2 COMMENTS ON THIS ENTRY. AND YES I DO CHEAK...






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Nejiha
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 05, 2008 @ 09:57pm
This is awsome!!!!!!!111 And it is funny that you make it up on the spot and i saw you type it so i know you realy did! 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 06, 2008 @ 12:11am
I like where the story is going. biggrin And I liked how you added in Susan's parents here, too. That really shows a lot about her character, because now we know a lot more about her and her family. I also liked the way you showed their reactions to their daughter's illness and the way Susan handled it also was written in an emotional way, which is good. I hope what i just said made sense, anyway nice entry and let me know when you add more.



Winry_Rockbell799
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