OK...i'm kinda surprised..so far alot of ppl have read this and not commented...acually Winery commented (THANK YOU!!! heart ) and she doesn't have any suggestions...so yea...i'm gonna keep writing this...and seriously...why are ppl LOOKING at this and not commenting?! It's kindadriving me up the wall...8 ppl look at my journal...and no one commented... eek ...it's aot like how i was sitting outside lastnight talking to my Cuz and i looked at a tree and it looked EXACTLY like someone was standing behind the tree, in a cape w/ the hood up (we had a storm and there was lightningin the distance so it was lighting up the figure and it didn't go away when the lighning went dark either....) twas freeky...
oh crap my fingers bleeding... now i have to type one handed...*stare at finger*
anyway...
wahmbulance The next day Susan STILL had the headache. She wondered breifly if she was comeing down with a fever, the termometer said no. in Fact it was if she wasn't heating properly. she cranked up the heat and got beakfast wahmbulance
ok...i have a question...should i give her the ill ness or is she coming down with somethng else? ^-^ i'm not writing more unless you guys-that-never-comment say something! twisted (yes i'm having fun with this) and please do't make it to where Winery is the only one who comments..=(
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ok i like the direction you're going with this. I think that my suggestion would be to go ahead and give her the illness, but don't make it come on too fast. Maybe like make her have the symptoms for a little while and then, when it seems right, go ahead and have her realize that she does have the illness? Maybe like add another character first who recognizes that she has the illness? I don't know, those were just things I was thinking about >< Let me know when you add more!