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My Insane Ramblings.
i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
alas a nother peice of rubish poetry! lol
~Why can't I Feel You?~
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I see you, but cannot feel you,
where are you, you left me so long ago,
I know i'm not supposed to feel this way,
as if i'll never find you again.
am I supposed to just forego,
all that we had so long ago,
the distance between us is growing,
even though your right behind me,
I hear you, but cannot feel you,
I'm not supposed to feel like,
you never really wanted me.
though all the thick and thin i alwase thought,
that I could sence you,
but now I know that it was only the wind,
wistling though the gap between us,
the ever growing, ever widningcanyon between us.
Why is it only me who feels this?
Why am I so diffrent than you?
Why?
BY:Sakuka
(no i do not have boyfriend issues)






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Neko_Bri
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 03:34pm
oh wow, that's agreat poem Sakuka!


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 09:25pm
Thanks, look at some of my other entries to! i have another poem...then my thoughts, lol my random thoughts!!!



Sakuka
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~Dreams of Eternity~
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 06, 2007 @ 01:03am
Little drops of rain, whisper of the pain, tears of love lost in the days gone by.

~Dreams of Eternity~


commentCommented on: Thu Feb 08, 2007 @ 09:03pm
*bows before the master of poems* your really good you know that?



Sakuka
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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 20, 2007 @ 01:10am
another great poem!!! I really liked it a lot! It's sad, but I like how I can really feel the emotions when I'm reading it!!! xd


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