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You're that special someone
So special you could fly
Adored by all that's breathed
And walked beneath the sky

And as you leave the ground
Sweet smiles and words of love
No loathe for your mistakes
Not one sign of regret

I sit and stare at this
An angel takes her leave
But now I only stare
Not once you turned my way

So then..

What would ever happen
If I grew wings like you
Soar higher than my sky
Could ever hold me down

I'd stare at you again
Only now I'm so high
Do you see what I see
Poor girl, grow some real wings

…“I’ll see you on the other side”
“When you’re ready” …
…“Don’t fall now”
“Wake up!” … “wake up”.. “wake up”

KARUNE-SAMA! WAKE UP!

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Bah! I felt like making a hate poem.. but then it turned out to this little manga I wanted to make for my friends.. @_@
Tell me how the beginning sounds... I'm not even sure how it starts... or even what it is....
Um… that part that isn’t italicised, that’s where this girl’s woken up by someone screaming her name. One of the three will happen:
a) She’ll find herself on the edge of a building with her friend screaming below her…
b) She’s woken up by someone because she’s overslept…
c) She’s been sleeping in class again and just had he same dream she had a few nights before…

Err… but she’s sort of this humanoid robot that’s recently been shipped to wherever or something… um.. y’know ‘Chobits’?.. something like that, only built from materials found on other planets… Oh! And the dream's about a dying girl who looks exactly like her, dying in a hospital bed and saying those words to her. Yeh, that’ll do for now. Tell me what you think.

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