ok guys i need help. what do u think of this thing? don't know what to call it, but i just kinda thought of it and needed to write it down any of u ever have that feeling before? please give me feed back. even if u don't think it will help, I'd love to hear it.
I can feel my heart is breaking.
I can feel my lungs collapsing.
I can feel this stories
Coming to am end.
I can see the clouds
Are clearing.
I can see your heart beat quickening,
With every beat mine slows.
I see your hope twinkle
Like diamonds in the sun.
I see your smile shining
From miles away.
With these last breaths,
I draw.
And these last words,
I say.
I want you to know,
I'm thankfull.
Thank you,
For letting me in
Letting me see your world,
Showing me
How the world should be.
Thank you for trusting me.
Thank you for sharing part of yourself,
With me.
Thank you for everything.
-11/29/2010
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