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Hollow Promise
Hollow Promise

Your word broke me apart,
My heart shattered,
I was powerless to do anything,
The choice was not mine, it was never my choice, I never had a chance.

Your words were;
"We'll talk."
Then silents, nothing.
Then later it was;
"I'll call you."
My phone never rings.

Now months have past, my heart is still missing, my chest aching.
You never said anything, I didn't get a chance.
Your words crushed me, My hope for us;
"We'll see."
So theres no chance for us. Your words, not mine.

A Hollow promise.
I don't understand, you've never broken one before.






User Comments: [3]
Wolf Goddess_Luna
Community Member





Sat Nov 14, 2009 @ 02:31am


Hey. This is a good one. So sorry. This is great as usual. Your so talented.


Foxless
Community Member





Tue Dec 15, 2009 @ 11:49pm


dude i so love how you lead up to a great ending do you do it on purpose?


Peasley
Community Member





Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 08:33pm


The second stanza was my personal favorite. So sad.
AGAIN, another lovely ending. Keep writing. :]


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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