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My Own Truth This is my poetry... I'm sorry if I'm not that good. Please help me become a better poet.


blu_aura
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Stolen life

I hear the shout,
the dieing scream of a friend from years past.
I run,
using it as an excuse not to see her.
I run through the crowd,
being cut and raped of my sanity.
She screams again, this time closer.
I run away,
trying not to be caught in the middle of the struggle.
Through another crowd being raped of my dignity and poise,
yet I hear her again, closer.
I ruun up to the corpse,
my one true love.
She stares at me with eyes that have seen the world.
I try to voice my apology, for being late...
but, she puts her finger up to my lips to quiet me.
Then, we kiss,
we forget the world, the precious time that is slipping through our hands.
She died during that kiss.
That kiss that stained my lips.
Now I cannot bare to look at her grave.
For I heard the screams, because,
I took her life.
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I would like you to name this poem, and then I'll give it a title.






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Mistoffelees221
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comment Commented on: Sun Jan 15, 2006 @ 02:36am
Stolen life...lol


comment Commented on: Sun Feb 12, 2006 @ 11:31pm
Thank-you! ^_^



blu_aura
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continuation
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comment Commented on: Sat Aug 05, 2006 @ 11:53pm
it sounds like an interesting love story


comment Commented on: Wed Dec 14, 2011 @ 02:06pm
That... is fu(king amazing.. I love all your poems, so far this one is my favorite!



King Banni
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