Ahg... I have a story that is rather rampant in my mind. It's rather old wordly and has me starting to set up for a rather long hual.
I started the little story cuz I couldn't stop thinking about pirates. Perhaps I should think more seriously on ninja stories though.... I don't really have any... I have ninjas but they're not realy the focal point, like any good ninja is not.
I really like my crew and as I work (metally) at the story they've really rounded out. It's told first person, one of my more favorite perspectives. It leaves people in the dark about everything going on behind the MC's back. I've really been working more on the outta story stuff than the in story stuff cuz I tend to not write on stories I've taken on mentally.
It's rather repeative...
But I like slowly unraveling the great mysteries and such. It's a nice break from Rivina cuz some times I get a little stumped there. Creating new lingos and such aren't my specialty, 'cept at new years and half year when change up my vocabulary.
I've been reading more 'grown up' filth so the swearing is starting to rub off on me and I'm currently filtering it out.
I had to laugh at my self, there was a bleeped out song and I knew the word bleeped was a F-bomb but I replaced it with freakin'... I had a good dying laugh on that one.
But since I'm working with the past Rivina also is in the past. Rivina is millenia upon millenia older than Earth merely because of it's dislocation in space-time. It's in a void about yay big and yay deep and faint fluxuations on invisible light spectrum hint at the seam it's hidden within.
However since my Rivina has strong connections to Earth the two started out as linked planets. The Illian Sea connected to the Indian Ocean, between the Philapeans and Thailand. The rift in which boats and other such craft could travers was known as the Gate, because I like simple terms. Of course only the considerably more advanced Rivinians know of it's existance.
The Rivinians are a very unique group of people... Their heritage is far longer than Earth's yet it went through it's tough spots. Before the kingdoms of Magi and Elf were joined they warred constantly and the lorian sects were divided and fought for secrecy and power within the Divisions and Sectors (yes, even back then they were known as Divisions and Sectors). By the time Earth reached it's Golden age of oceanic travels Rivina was well on it's way to fussion power and intergalactic travels.
Despite their obvious superiority they left Earth rather left alone, banishing broken outlaws there and the patrols working to keep Terrans on their side and Rivinians on their side.
Now I bet ya'll think this is good and all but I do have a point... Yes, I'll hurry and make it...
The captain has three Rivinian crewmen. One is an unusually tall elf (a tower 6'3" without his coustom shoes and 6'6" with them), a Dwarf that he fished out the sea after his ship was attacked by pirates soon after crossing the Gate, the last he doesn't realize is an alien because he's a Magi, a very human looking race of aliens.
The Gate is located in the second Triangle and the Intersteller Gate is (of course) located in the Burmuada Triangle. The Burmuada Gate shots the unsuspecting ships and planes (much later of course) into an demensional rift that lands them at a planet within the RALIX hold.
The Empire desires that planet so that they might get to Rivina through Earth. However the RALIX and VESTA refuse to let them take it, rather risking the destruction of the portal than the invasion of Rivina, a key provider of weapons and other supplies.
The last arch involves an Empire spy returning to Earth via the Burmuada Gate and is attempting to cross to Rivina when the Rivinians aboard the Siete Espada stop them in a rather predictable manner than you can predict yourself.
 Ray the Good Soldier · Sat Mar 07, 2009 @ 02:04am · 0 Comments |
