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Untitled Our home in the stars is waiting empty A last shaky breath the ticket to eternity You stare through me with eyes wide open Reminding me of a king's courtesan And I am the shadow in the back of your mind Longing to show you the way things really are To comfort you if the truth were too much to take But as I'm sure you are aware, I am only your reflection Reaching out from the mirror to stroke your hair Unaware of my presence and losing yourself Hiding deep in the corners of sanctuaries _________ It's been reworked a bit.. Still shite. But better.

Posted by: Rylen Thu May 05, 2005 @ 03:29am

"I could burn this place to the ground."

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Alex Taliesin
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Commented on: Fri May 06, 2005 @ 04:05am


	I don't see why you call the things you write "shite." Everything that you write is great, and I know other people tell you that as well. I still say you could get some books published if you kept at it. You have wonderful ideas, and a great imgination, what you post on here being examples. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Attack - 30 Seconds to Mars Good song, you should download it.

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