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Rewrite: A rewrite from Twilight I wrote. ~Part 3~
~Authors Saying Thingy~
If you peoples didn’t know this is from Eclipse, and Breaking Dawn. Except it’s my rewrite. Hehehe this is fun. XD
~Last Time~
Crap!! Alice must have had a vison of me telling Bella, because she’s really pist. I kindly kissed Bella before I stepped outside...
3.Secret?!
BPOV
Edward kissed me as he left the room. I was sad about the way Edward was acting, mostly when Alice came in, It made me so worried. I have no clue what Edward did and it worries me. I would secretly listen to there conversation but they would probably know.
EPOV
I felt Bella in distress when I kissed her, she didn’t give her normal kiss, it was like she was afraid of me. I stepped out of the room as Alice was yelling at me. “Damn you Alice, keep your damn voice down!!!” She just giggled as I said that. “What?!” She said “Nothing Edward I just wanted to stop you from telling her. I’m sorry I made a scene.” she giggled “Why are you giggling Alice?” She said “It’s just funny the you acted!” She was blocking her mind from me. I hated when they did that sometimes.
APOV
Hehe this is fun, 1. Keeping a secret from Bella, and 2. Keeping a secret from Edward!!! Crap!!! Edward you heard that didn’t you. I’m dead
EPOV
“I knew it!!!! I knew you were keeping something away from me Alice, now what is it!?” She said she’s not going to tell me. “Maybe I’ll tell Bella about the surprise” She said “You’ll be damned if you do Edward!!!” “I’m already damned, I’m a god damn vampire!!!!!!” She said “So am I” she had a sweet look on her face. “Please Alice tell me” She said “Ok, only if you promise not to tell Bella the secret, ok?” “Whatever Alice” “Ok, Emmet’s taking over the bachelor party!” “What how did he know that I proposed to Bella!?” Alice said “I told him, I had a vison so I told the family!” “Ok Whatever I promise I won’t tell the secret but it’s killing me not telling her!” “Thank You.” Alice said as I left the room.
~RAN OUT OF TIME HERE, NEXT CHAPTER: Trouble~
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Rewrite. A rewrite of Twilight I wrote. ~Part 2~
~Last time~
He lifted me up into his arms. He said “You are the most beautiful woman in the world.” He started to hum my lullaby as I blushed. I said, “I love you Edward” as I drifted of to sleep.
2.Shock
BPOV
I woke up to Edward smiling at me, his normal crocked grin, than I remembered last night he proposed to me!!! I started to hyperventilate and Edward asked “ Bella, are you ok?!” he looked worried even tho it was a normal thing I did. The only answer came into my head, “Yes, I just went into shock from when you asked me to marry you.” I mean it was perfectly true. He gave me a harsh look as I asked “What’s wrong?” He said “Nothing, I’m just really happy.” “Oh, I’m really happy to, you know how I am, Stuff sinks in late.” I said with a smile, but underneath I felt there was something wrong, he was acting strange.
EPOV
I couldn’t tell her about the surprise for her, But the look in her eyes just said tell me what’s up. I mean I hate lying to her, but I promised Alice that it would be a surprise for her, so that meant that I couldn’t tell her. Alice would probably know if I tell Bella, and Alice gets really mad and I don’t want that.
APOV
I had a vison. Damn u Edward, he’s going to let it slip, I got to get in there room before he tells her!!
BPOV
Edward still had a harsh look on his face. It looked like he was trying to withstanding himself! Than Alice bursted into the room. Edward yelled “What the hell Alice!!” Alice said “I have to talk to you Edward...NOW!!!” She sounded really pist off , maybe whatever Edward did is what he’s keeping from me.
EPOV
Crap!! Alice must have had a vison of me telling Bella, because she’s really pist. I kindly kissed Bella before I stepped outside...
~PLZ COMMENT!!! HOPEFULLY THIS IS LONGER 4 UZE.~
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