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just a lil something..... this is a story i made.......


MCRJess715
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this is a story i made b/c i was bored. hope y'all like it


....Its the first day, a fresh start. i take out my sketch book and i started...i looked around, i saw this kid sitting by his self. it looked like he was writing something..so i decided to draw him writing. When i looked up there was samm standing in front of me...."hey samm whats up?" As we talked i continued to draw. "hi jess, not much......what classes to you have....any the same?" i pulled out my scedual and we compared them...."hey we have parenting together...awesome!" ""ring"" theres the bell gotta go to class. All day i was drawing that same kid..there was something about him that i love to draw it. As i finished the drawing, he finally noticed me...he walked over. "Hi. why do you keep staring at me?" He a lil shy kid, a freshmen maybe.."oh im sorry im drawing and i saw you sitting.........by your self.....and i wa...." I cut off. Its lunch time, i didnt eat. i decided to see what Mr. Newbury was up to.
~"Hey Newbury! how was your summer?" He looked up and smiled big. "hey jess i see your still alive haha" "yea.. ha ha "I sat down in the wooden chair. "look at everything i did over the summer..." I pulled out my notebook and sketch book. He looked through it and read the story......""ring ring"" "oh man theres the bell..time for....." i couldnt remember what class i had next...."see ya laterz" As i walked to my next class i saw that kid again, he asked me why i was following him...but i wasnt. i told him that im leaving and i wasnt following him. All day i was thinking about what he had said to me..i couldnt get it out of my head.
~The next day i showed him the drawing, he said i was really good. i told him thanks and i left. Today i really didnt feel like drawing. i went around to all my friends, to catch things up. i found Jesse "hi jessica i missed you so much." "hey" i smiled really big. "OMG i missed you too!" We talked for a while, then the bell rang he walked me to class.
~After school i took the long way home, i was in no rush. I decided to stop at the park and do some more drawing. i looked at im phone, it was already 5:30. i grabbed my stuff and went home. when i got there my dad was yelling and screaming. i grabbed my laptop and went to my room. i really wanted to finish my story. That night i stayed up all night thinking about that kid. Tomorrow is saturday so i can sleep in. Morning came too fast, when i walked out of my room it was 12:34, Cindy, cole and Emily was here. "Hi EmmyBug! hi ColieBolie!" They both ran over to give me a hug. "Jess guess what?!!" "yea Emmy?" "im spending the night!!!!" wow cindy was actually letting her stay the night. i wounder where Kris is....."thats awesome Emmy" Then Cole started talking to me saying something about a dino...i think!
~The weekend passed, and school was here. Everyday that passed i noticed that the kid was more and more alone. Today i didnt see the kid. A few days passed and everyday he wasnt there...then Jesse came over to me and asked if i herd about Freddie killing his self. "whos Freddie? wait is he him??" i pulled out my drawing. "yea him!" "oh...ok......" i thought why did he do that and i didnt know his name was Freddie. i wounder why. Now all was left was the drawing. "Jess are you alright?" "huh..oh...yea....." Newbury always knew when there was something wrong. "No you're not, whats buggin?" There was a really long silence. "I just cant get Freddie out of my head........." I pulled out my drawing to show who Freddie was. "he committed suicide the other night....."
~The next few day people at school were still in shock of the suicide. There was a sadness filling the air. Less anger and more tears. After the weeks passed things started to get back to normal. I started drawing again and wanted to finish my stories!




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