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my screwed life
just one mistake
once again....i shall put up a poem that i wrote.....long ago...and it might not make much sense seeing as how i had to change a couple of things cause i had written it for somebody who i could care less about now

The shadows of hate everywhere
This darkness caressing your heart
Insecure, hating, waiting for a chance to explode
The darkness of hate took over your life
Mischief, rituals, only to hold back this anger
The shining light of love completely vanished
People fuel your anger with their answers of no
But you found a way back to the circle
One person left your life and you lost patience
You stopped trying but knew you needed to try
The light was back but still unseen
You found someone and felt the urge to try once more
The feeling of being shot down comes to mind
That one feeling, that dark feeling ready to grow
Her heart covered with love and hate from the past
Yours just with the darkness of hate
You take a risk willing to feed the hate
She talks, laughs, and you think it might last
You take your chance with those three words
Only to hear those same words back
The shadows start to release your life
But still they caress your heart
Your life has finally changed
But still you keep holding back
She keeps showing love hoping for it back
You give it back but still your heart is covered in black
She fills your body with the feeling of love
The light piercing the darkness in your heart
You let go and stop holding back, the explosion comes
It wasn't what you thought cause of the anger
But now you feel like a total stranger
She loves you and you love her
You keep thinking her name over and over
Those four letters mean millions
But for you it spells love
Those four letters spell the name of your love
Your love for her burns bright
Hoping that she will be your light
Her name is beautiful along with her personality
The beauty of her inside and out
Her voice soft like flowers
You only hope that nothing goes wrong
"So far nothing wrong between us, but the shared love from you to me and me to you"
She moves and still you love her
Only because you still see her without another
"Beauty is only skin deep but hers goes all the way"
her love and beauty is bright and true
He doesn't care as long as it means that he’s with you.






User Comments: [3]
Young T PHX 602
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Sun Mar 25, 2007 @ 09:26am


That was really good


sasuke785_ lover!!!!
Community Member





Sat May 05, 2007 @ 08:38am


that's me totally bro. crying


Harrah-Chan
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Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 02:37am


Wow, you should turn that into a song. Pretty awsome.


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