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Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(translated: Welcome!!! =D )
hey pplz this is another poem i wrote when i was depressed(long story) read it and tell me what u think (i wrote this in 20 minutes, so if i sucks, oh well)


Don't Give Up

Have you ever wanted to achieve something?
Only to have it escape from your grasp?
Especially when you were so close,
You want to give it all up
And forget all about it

On your path towards your dream and success
If you stumble and fall and can't get up
Look to a friend, lending you their hand
Take it, don't try to go on the path alone
Take it, and go back on your way






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The Lights of Seoul
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 12:42am
its not the best sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 06:56am
hey u shouldn't be negative! u should write a book full of poems that u wrote. its nice poem!



Dark Hikaru 26
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KitsuneKraze900
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 04, 2007 @ 01:58am
THAT'S TELLING HER NANA SAKI!! YUNA YOU BETTER DO WHAT SHE SAYS OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND BEAT YOU WITH A FUGGIN STICK!!! stressed


commentCommented on: Thu Jan 04, 2007 @ 02:12am
calm down michelle ^ ^;;;

well i dont like it that much^ ^;;;



The Lights of Seoul
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