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The Shadows Realm
Get a little preview to the odd and magical things that are my thoughts
Random piece of writing
Full Moons and Seas of Souls
Home to Me of The Angels Dark
The Bed of Death I made for Many
The Gift of Life I have Taken
My Grip is Strong
My Power unmatched
You hear me coming on Tattered Wings
You see me coming in Hood and Cloak
You feel my Touch like a long-awaited Lover
And Now Your Gone like a Shadow In The Night
The Bell has Rung
The Reaper has Come






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lil-ball-o-nothingness
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 30, 2006 @ 04:40pm
me like! ^.^ ... personally, i think it's better than your previous one... but they were both good. if it were a poem, i would say... (constructive criticism only, don't be angry! ) work on the rythem/flow of the words... but it is very descriptive, and an interesting peice of writing! ^.^ xd


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 01, 2007 @ 07:13pm
Nice makes me fell all emo and such emo
hope thats what you were going for 3nodding



Dora~the~emo~explorer
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