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biggrin a petal follows seemly from the sky and no one bends to pick it up. all that happens is that it gets swept up in the wind all alone. it's lonely and cold .....but no ones takes any notice of this as it drifts around the sands through the rough winds of the bullying sky.....but no one cares or bothers to take any notice. it struggles in the startled skies but no one hears its cries as it skims the threshold of waters and then suddenly it gets sucked down but its tears and cries are soon buried by the ripples of water but no one hears its cry ...the petal twists and turns through the water, being swept by its currents. Tossed far from its home by wind and rain. Alone the petal cries, smothered by the cruelties of the world. Until someone sees a single petal far from the flower it fell from. Surely this is a rare thing, the person would think, that something so beautiful could be strong enough to drift so far. taking the petal gently in their hands they take it with them. The petal brings joy to a single person, even if it may have been battered, and its soft tears adding to its wonder. heart
by me and Joker_O_Hearts
by me and Joker_O_Hearts
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((Thats my response. Very well written, i just thought it needed a happier ending. mrgreen ))