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my ideas
i might bout stuff like stories idk really
part 16 of my story
*in this part bebe and the others where travelin.At that time bebe was playin wit mira.Vox and seph was lookin out at the view.And zeke and elecktra was tryin to find Aquaous on the Gpa.*
Bebe:are u almost there?
Zeke:yep.
Bebe:*giggles*yay
Elecktra:yea we just have to past..Huh?
*the Gpa starts to act up*
Elecktra surprised h no.
Bebe:wats wrong? sad
Elecktra:the Gpa its actin up.I have to call Diget.
*she contacts Diget*Hello diget?
Diget:yea?
Elecktra:we have a problem
Diget:wat?
Elecktra:The gpa its not wokin.
Diget surprised oo that is a problem.U cant put any coordinates in it?
Elecktra:wait I'll try.*She tris and it starts to get worse.**sighs*
I tried but it got worse.
Diget:well i cant fix it.I have to be Wit u in order to fix it.
Elecktra surprised h..well thx 4 trying Diget.Later.*Communiation ended*Well i guess we'll have to dis the old fashion way.
Bebe:wat u mean?
Elecktra:i mean we'll have to ask ppl
Bebe surprised h.*she looks around until she saw an island*Hey wat bout there?
Elecktra:um ok.Zeke?mind headin there?
Zeke:sure.
*they started to head to the island.*
Seph:hey guys look who's here?
Zeke,ELecktra,and bebe:huh?
*they all saw crow-san,nami,and two other people.Two girls a young and older one.Zeke was suprised when he saw the young girl.*
Zeke sad thinkin)Melissa?
*they made it to the docks and bebe was the first to get out.*
Bebe:Crow-san...Nami!^^
*she ran and gave crow-san a hug then she gave Nami a hug.*
Bebe:its so nice to see u guys again.
*zeke and the others walk to the others*
Elecktra:hey u guys^^
Crow san and nami:hey
Nami:how u guys been?
Elecktra surprised h fine...i guess stare
Nami:hmm?wats wrong?
Elecktra:well our gpa is actin up so we came here to ask questions bout how to get to Aquaous.
Nami surprised h...Hey crow san didnt u say u been there before?
Crow:yea?
Nami:maybe u can help them get there.?
Bebe:yea^^thats a good idea.
*zeke saw the little girl and the girl looked at him and she was happy to see him.
???:Zeke!I cant believe its u!!^_^
Zeke:Melissa...How u been?
Melissa:good.^^
Zeke:well at least i know ur safe.
Bebe:hey zeke who's she?
Zeke surprised h she's my lil sister,Melissa.
Melissa:hi its nice to meet u.^^
Bebe:aww she's so cute.
Melissa:*giggles and blushes alittle*i get that alot.
Zeke:why ur here?
Melissa surprised h mom left me wit her friend Naomi and i live wit her.
Zeke:wait where's mom?
Melissa surprised h she had to go do something.She'll be back.^^
Zeke surprised h ok.hey sis how u met crow and nami?
Melissa surprised h they came to naomi's house.Naomi knows crow.I been there playin wit mina and gigi.*alittle dragon pops up*Oh I mean we play wit them.
Monia:huh?
Gwen:...?
Zeke:lol u have a dragon now?
Melissa:yea^^isnt he cute?
Zeke:lol monia has a brother now.
Monia: stare Grr.
Melissa surprised h hey seph^^...Hi vox^^.
Seph:hey how u been?
Melissa:good^^U still try to compete wit zeke?
Seph:lol u still know me.
Melissa:*smiles and giggles*Oh yea i have to get back wit Naomi..come on u guys.
*everyone followed melissa to naomi's house.Naomi's house was in a sacered part of the island.*
Bebe:who is naomi?
Crow surprised h she's a guardian to Inari's beads.
Bebe:inari?
Crow:yea she's the one who gave these beads on my hands and arms.
Bebe:why?
Crow:....*he starts to look a little upset*Its nothin..she just gave them to me.
Bebe: sad oh...ok
*they made it to Naomi's place.*
Elecktra:it looks like a shrine.
Zeke:yea.
Melissa:*starts run up the srtairs to the place* hey mina...naomi!!im back!!^_^ and crow brought friends.^^
*naomi comes out*
Naomi:*smiles*wow big crowd.Nice to meet u people.I guess u know my name now.
Bebe:yea^^
Melissa:hey naomi this is my big bro zeke.
Naomi:well its nice to meet u zeke.
Zeke:yea.Have u seen my mom?
Naomi surprised h she had to do something.She'll be back
Zeke surprised h ok.
Naomi:please come on in.
*they all when in side.They took their shoes off at the front and walked in*
*melissa saw mina*
Melissa:hey mina!
Mina:*looks up*huh?Oh hey melissa.^^
Melissa:dis is my big brother zeke.
mina surprised h so thats ur bro?
Melissa:yea and i want to be like him^^ too.
Mina:lol yea.*walks over to zeke*she told me so much bout u.
Zeke:she did?
Mina:yea.She told me how ur a good fighter and how nice u are.
Zeke:*smiles*oh.
Bebe:hey seph ...elecktra lets go look around.Melissa..mina mind showin us around?
Mina:sure.
Melissa:yea.^^Follow us.
*mina,melissa and the others walked off.*
Naomi:zeke wait..
*Zeke stops*
Zeke:huh?
Namoi:melissa told me alot bout u...and ur mother also did too..U must really want to met her.
Zeke:....yea i do.I havent seen her in while...And i kinda missed her.
Naomi:well since u havent been around Melissa have been training.
Zeke:training?
Naomi:yea she's going good.She's been trianing wit mina.Mina is actally is pretty good for a ninja.
Zeke:so melissa a ninja?
Naomi:u can say that...Ur mom sometimes wonder bout u...If ur safe,r u happy where u were.
Zeke:really?
Naomi:yea.
*meanwhile at zailos's palace*
Zailos:its almost time,bebe.
Evil bebe: twisted finally.Then we can take over the reched place.*she touches the one of the capsles*wit the help of these two nothin can go wrong.
Zailos:*evil laugh*Yes we'll have our time.(thinkin)and Angel u will be mine.And we'll rule the land.
*at that time melissa and mina was done give bebe and the others the tour around the place.
Mina:well thats it.
Bebe:wow this place it beautiful all the sakura trees.So pretty.
Elecktra:yea.
Nami:crow?
Crow:huh?
Nami:are u gonna tell her?
Crow:.....i'll wait
Nami:no u need to tell her why those beads are on u before she finds out on her own.
Crow:*sighs* I know..*he goes to naomi*Naomi?
Naomi:huh?yea?
Crow:i need ur help to tell bebe bout these beads on my hands.
Naomi:*looks a little upset*oh...ok then bring bebe here.
Crow surprised k nami can u find bebe?
Nami surprised h ok..*she goes to find bebe wit the others*Hey bebe?
Bebe:huh?
Nami:can u come wit me?
Bebe:um sure.
*they walked to where naomi and crow are*
Bebe:huh?wats going on?
Crow:um bebe i have to tell u something bout these beads....
Bebe:yea?
*crow was bout to tell but he look at his hands and balls them up.Naomi looks at him worried*
Naomi:*sighs*bebe....those beads control crow and the beast insde him.
Bebe:beast?
Naomi:yes and i was who put them on him to seal the beast but once the beads come off the beast comes out.
Bebe:but wait wat happens to crow?
Naomi:well he's aura will become stronger.He tries his best to control it.I think its beacuse of the necklace u gave him.I noticed dat now.
Bebe surprised h sad Crow?
Crow:yea?
Bebe:u ok?
Crow:...yea.I wanted to tell u cuz the last person didnt take it well.
Bebe:last person?
Crow:yea...they ran away scared.
Naomi:there's also another level to the power...He transforms into the beast which he cant control.Thats why he wears these beads on his hands..to seal it.His parents knew he was diffrent thats why they brought him to me.
Crow:thats why i said ur my first friend..Ppl treated me diffrent.It wasnt in a good way.I was isolated from others.
Bebe surprised h sad ...Well u still be my friend anyway.It doesnt matter how diffrent u are.
*bebe hugs crow*
Bebe:ur my friend till the end ok?
Crow:*looks at bebe and smiled a little*Yea.
*bebe touches the beads in his hands.And started to glow*
Crow:huh?
*the glow burst and pushed bebe a littled*
Bebe:wa wat was that?
*at that time bebe hands started to fell werid*
Bebe:...?
*she looked at her hand and water started to a appear floating*
Beb:huh?
*a little sprite appears and transformed into the water goddess,Demetri.*
Bebe biggrin emetri?
Demetri:bebe its seems u gained the power to heal and protect.
Bebe:heal?protect?
Crow:bebe?
Naomi:it the water goddess.
Demetri:yes that power can help u heal and proctect others including urself.U can use any type of water purify it and use it to ur advantage.
Bebe:wow so is zeke and the others...
Demetri:yes they'll soon get theres when the time is right.
Bebe surprised h.*she balls her hand and the water dissapered*
Demetri:well i'll be off good luck wit ur travel,bebe.
Bebe: 3nodding Yea.
Crow:bebe who was that?
Bebe:my guardian...Well its time to go.
Naomi:wait bebe u can spend the night if u want.
Bebe:um sure ok^^ thank u.
*a woman appears and melissa come in wit the others*
Melissa:Mommy^^
Zeke:mom?
*zeke's mom dropped all her stuff and ran to zeke hugging him tight cryin*
Zeke's mom:Oh my baby.Ur here.I missed u so much.How u been?
Zeke:good u?
Zeke's mom:aww I missed u so much.me and melissa always be wonderin how u were.
Zeke:lol ok mom.
Zeke's mom:im just so happy to see ur here.My u have grown.
Zeke:lol
Zeke'mom:how bout i makes some food.Does that sound good?
Melissa:yea 4laugh
Zeke's mom:lol well i get started.It seems we have a huge crowed.^^Naomi u dont mind?
Naomi:u can cook here if u want.^^
Zeke's mom:^^thx ok let go get started comeon melissa.
*bebe looked at zeke*
bebe:u have a nice family
Zeke:lol yea and goofy too.
Bebe surprised h yea check this out.
*she shows zeke, seph, and the others her power.
Seph:wow bebe how...
elecktra:u can control water.^^
Zeke:wat can u do wit water?
Bebe:well i can heal and protect.
Seph:cool
Bebe:my guardian told me that u guys will soon get ur s in time.
Seph:cool smile
Bebe:lol yea i know.
*most of the group's stomach growls*
Zeke,Elecktra,Seph,crow,bebe,mina,and naomi: eek ...... sweatdrop
Bebe:lol i guess we're all hungry.
Zeke:lol yea.U know i haven had my mom's cookin in a while...but i cant wait to have it again.
Bebe:i cant wait to head to the ball moonlight ball
Melissa surprised oo can i go?
Crow:how u get here so quick?
Melissa:lol its because of my ninja skills. ninja
Nami:lol
Zeke's mom:foods ready!! 4laugh
Bebe:lol ok.....MMM smells good.Well come on people lets go eat.^^
Everyone:Yea.
*they all go to one of the rooms to go eat.*


*well im done wit this part be sure to comment me bout this part*






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Crowmai
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commentCommented on: Mon Dec 07, 2009 @ 02:50am
its cool ur capuring me but just was crow remeber san is a separate person and dont forget about my blood seal on my left forehead


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