Wow.. I haven't done anything in this in a long time, and I also haven't written anything story-wise in a long time too. so today I got to reading and decided to set a new plan for myself. it consists of this; i'm planning to write again and do at least a bit each day. (they may not all get posted here, but I'll try to put them up so you all can read them) The stories I write, at least at first are going to be exercises in fleshing out my writing and working on brushing up my skills a bit. so to start, i'm going to toss in two of my 'scenes' I did a few months back and posted on my real journal site. I plan to later this week(whne i'm off from work) revise them then post them and let you all see what you think of the 'imprived versions'. feel free to post on these ones as well if you want to give input ^_^
without farther ado, here they are XD
Dark Night
After a long, passion filled night I can feel her tears hitting my chest in the darkness. I reach up and gently brush a tears from her soft cheek. "Why are you crying Angel?" I ask softly as I run my other hand through her long, black hair though I can't see it. Her body is hidden from me by the shadows of the dark night.
"It's nothing Love" she replies softly but in actuality.. there is much more going through her head as she leans down and buries her face in the side of her lover's neck. "I'm sorry the last words you are going to hear in this world is a lie." She thinks to herself sadly as she inhales softly against his neck. She can smell the scent of their recent lovemaking in the air, as well as the scent of his sweat. But the sweetest scent of all.. no Human can smell; it is the scent of the life's blood running through his veins. She places a soft kiss on the main artery of his neck and the last thing he feels is her needle sharp fangs sink into his flesh and her hand pressing down on his chest as he instinctively arches his back as her fangs slide home. After a few moments she detaches her fangs from his neck and says in a low, sad tone of voice. "I'm sorry that the only sort of Angel I can be is the Angel of Death."
Twisted Love
His back is to me and he is on his way to the door, without thinking I pick up the glass vase to my right and hurl it at the door. It shatters in an explosion of glass and puff of petals as it crashes into the wall right beside the door as his hand comes up to rest on the door knob. He goes completely still and the muscles in his back stiffen. "Don't ******** walk away from me.." I say in a soft tone of voice that seems out of place after such a furious action. He knows when I use that tone i'm beyond fury or even anger.. and he reacts just as I was hoping he would. He turns and looks at me with clear anger in his stormy dark blue eyes as he stalks back over, and in one quick action grabs both my wrists in his right hand and forces them over my head as he uses his body to pin me to the wall. "Don't push me tonight, I already told you we are through." He says in a low tone of voice.
I tip my head up and meet his furious eyes with my own anger filled ones and defiantly tip my head back so I can hold his gaze. "Why? becasue I told you I don't want you?" I nearly spit at him. As I do so I can feel the air in the room chance around us, it almost seems to crackle with anger, hate and disgust. I can see in his eyes my words both hurt and angered him. As he hears them his fingers tighten around my wrists to the point I know i'm going to have bruises from his fingers, and I have to bite my lower lip so as not to let out a gasp of pain. "Yes, i'm done with your lies Carrie" He says in a tone filled with venom and hate as he lets go of my wrists and turns his back on me again. As he does so and starts to walk away I slide down the wall and end up propped up against it as tears finally come to my eyes. "I don't want you Kai.. I need you" I say in a low tear chocked voice as I watch his back. He pauses again and half turns his body and looks completely stunned by my words. "Say that again..?" he asks in a low tone filled with disbelief almost like he can't believe what he just heard. "I don't want you Kai.. I need you or.. I did." I say to him as the tears that were glistening in my eyes finally stream down my cheeks as I sits crumpled against the wall.
A look of great pain comes over Kai's face as he walks back over to her and sinks to his knees in front of her. He reaches out to wrap his arms gently around her shoulders and pull Carrie into his lap with her head against his chest as he sits back and rocks her gently. "I'm sorry Baby.. can you ever forgive me?" Kai asks in a low, tear filled voice as he holds her close and finally seems to realize just how close he came to losing the best thing in his life.
 Phoe Starfire · Tue Oct 27, 2009 @ 10:04am · 2 Comments |
