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my life is hell
my life is miserable, why do i even give life a chance. I want to do a cheerful dance, but you see their is no hope for me. i should give up and weep in shame or i can make my grave. i want this life to end, so i can spend my life in darkened heart
the spirits of grace
the light is beautiful
the darkness is misunderstood
but you see
in order to fully understand the meaning of life adn death you msut travel to
the inner soul and search out what you seek
you must choose your path a path to what you say a path to life or a path to
the misunderstood you will have a hard walk to fulfill for your journey has only begun
embrace the light and embrace the darkness you must fear the darkness to understand the light but you must
embrace death to see the light it may not make sense to your soul but you will know when to fear and embrace the light
choose your path wisely for the choice may make you have a hard walk to
face but only in your heart you will know in time if you are
worthy of taking this journey seek out what you search brave sould
the spirits are calling you hear to guide for i am one of the misunderstood but only you can choose your destiny

may this advice serve you well in the after life- taken from the varathian gardens of scalen- which is a book i am currently writing please tell me what you think






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Hylian Werewolf
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 10, 2009 @ 05:24pm
Very nice Talon-chan! Don't forget your punctuation and grammar though. I've seen WAY too many good stories fall apart at the seams because of that. Also, for some reason, I myself get very agitated when reading something that has no punctuation what-so-ever....

But that's just my advice. Follow it if you wish.


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