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hi sakisa here this my first poem please enjoy.
Title: She's Beautiful
There is one girl that makes me feel great.
She makes me feel like this at any rate.
She makes me jump for joy!
I know,mywords sound coy.
She's makes my heart soar high above.
It's like a heavenly dove.
Suddenly I realized why this world is full of love.
Listen closely,can you hear it?
No need to fear.
For it is only the sound of my happy heart.
Listen closely,doesn't it sound like art?
My heart thumps passionately for you.
I feel the bumps on your skin.
Your smell,like peaches,I enjoy greatly,I hope our love isn't a sin.
Any fool can tell that you caught me under your spell.
Even if you use me as a tool.
I'm forever under your rule.
I'm ridin' high.Can't you see me as I fy?Join me here in the sky.Spread our wings and soar.Turn our backs to the wind.Our parents will send for us.They'll see us,but can't reach us.We'll be gone,forever in time.Forever with her beauty,thankfully shes all mine.
thnx 4 reading more coming soon. also leave a comment on what you think,also if you want more. thnx again!~_^






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Uchi-Michi
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 05, 2009 @ 06:57am
nice...
soo my master is the poetic type??
3nodding The student will soon definitely beat the teacher!!


commentCommented on: Thu Jun 11, 2009 @ 10:07pm
heyyy um i dont kno u but dang dudez thiz iz beautiful wink



niNja_sockiiZ
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Xxdrama_queen1xX
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 23, 2009 @ 10:33pm
nice poem biggrin


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