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my feelings and story
screw it i love you
I told you once, i told you twice
if i lose you im gonna lose bein nice
with all do respect im speachless around you, when i walk away i end up around you,so all i can say is screw it i love you
chorus:
you make me feel when i am numb
you turn me into a nerd when i am dumb
what is it i cant do when im around you
you make me strong when i am weak
your so addictive ur like a drug to me
what is it i cant do when im around you

verse:now sometimes i think i love you is a little to simple
when you smile its like i turned into paper crimpled (how do you think i feel)
your like a model in my eyes
you shine like a star and fly into the sky (omg ur the best for me)
so all i can say is screw it i love you!

chorus:
you make me feel when i am numb
you turn into a nerd when i am dumb
what is it i cant do when im around
you make me strong when i am weak
your so addictive your like a drug to me
what is it i cant do when im around you

verse:so tell me babe how do you feel
its like when we flirt it turns into a sexual field(do you think we should go on)
when you walk i think where walking to a disco you and me partying like we wanna get something outve our system(and you dance like a queen)
so no matter what i do i think about you
and im like a slave cause theres no way to get outve you (im trapped in the lovely cage)
so now that i think i found you i think i have you i think i can alow you to hold my heart
so tell me baby! what else can i do but say screw it i love you!!!!!!!!

chorus:you make me feel when i am numb
you turn me into a nerd when i am dumb
what is it i cant do when im around you!!!!!!!!!!
you make me strong when i am weak
your so addictve your like a drug to me!!
what is it i cant do around you!!!!!

.........i love you too much what can i say...
you chopped me up put me in your cage......
....i cant think when im around you...
you are my medicine......
my only chance of servival...
i can not live if im a....round.....X.X wahmbulance

this is a song i made it didnt take long lol well i hope you enjoyed it i hope it makes you think about the one you love



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User Comments: [4]
Blubunny11
Community Member





Sun Apr 19, 2009 @ 05:16am


awwwwwww! X3 this song is so great! crying i like it alot its really good


Im going to smile like nothing's wrong,
talk like everything's perfect,
act like it's just a dream
and pretend that life isn't hurting me.
Pancake_Massacre
Community Member





Tue Apr 21, 2009 @ 04:11am


cool song dude i luv it smile


Sandy Cat Killer
Community Member





Sat Apr 25, 2009 @ 11:13pm


ok wulf, here's a tip 4 whenever u write a song, always seperate the chorus from another part of the song. otherwise ppl will think that the chorus is never-ending. so, seperate it in paragraphs. need an example? u kno where 2 look. anyways, that's some good lyrics right there tho.


L8DY-N3KO
Community Member





Sat May 09, 2009 @ 05:28am


this is really good lol
i love yor poems oh write some mmore in your small yellow book plz cuz i'm i am in my doggy one
soooo i wonder whos this about heart heart redface redface redface 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding idea idea idea idea 4laugh 4laugh 4laugh 4laugh xp heart
lol i'm hyper


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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