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If your reading this >.> then die or leave a comment
Guess what? Fear my stories! Ok....you don't have to...
I wrote these on Sunday April the fifth.
I hope who ever reads these, leave a comment.
I really want to know if I suck as bad as I think I do...

If I could erase the things I've done,
Undue the thing's I've said
and turn back time to fix it,
Would you still keep me in your heart?
Or have I fallen from the grace that is your love?
Your eternal embrace I long for,
All that is you I hunger for,
Yet I cannot have you
For the real me
says "No".

Loneliness and depression
How I longed to escape from your embrace
Your sick despair and everlasting emptiness.
Your sorrow is what draws me in
Yet I find no longing in your embrace
No love in your words
and no warmth in your touch.
All I feel is the everlasting winter
In which you stay
How I longed...
to feel the warmth again....

iSinful
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  • User Comments: [4]
    StateAlchemist Natsu
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    Mon Apr 06, 2009 @ 06:05am


    It looks great to me. ^^


    Srintella Tiagara
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    Mon Apr 06, 2009 @ 03:54pm


    Nice poem. Its really sad and I love it. Keep up the good work. ^^


    The Void User
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    Tue Apr 07, 2009 @ 09:18pm


    wow nice poems... i see u give a journal entry often =3


    Reality in Tatters
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    Sun Apr 12, 2009 @ 10:10pm


    "All I feel is the everlasting winter
    In which you stay in."
    The repeated "in" is not necessary, in fact it sort of weakens it. Overall, it is quite beautiful. You've got a way with words kiddo! Strong work.


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