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my make up story about a teennager girl with a powerful wand
tell me if this part of the begginnging of the story sounds sad alittle
In a city of Daly City, Ca near San Francisco. A young teenager girl who is 16 years old named May Ellen. She hates living in California Because she has no one to hang out with and she thinks that everyone in school is ignoring her and think she not there but only one friend notices her.But LAst year for summer she spend time with her favorite aunt,uncle and her cousin in Dayton, Ohio. She sometimes wish she lives with them, She don feel happy in California anymore.She told her aunt about her problem during the summer.
There was a once a young girl name ... she felt nothing but sadness and alone, she never fit in anywhere and everyone she was around made her feel like an empty seat. This girl all alone and helpless would cry each night with no one there to hold her, comfort her or care. The only people she felt cared was her aunt, uncle and cousin. This made this lonely girl happier than ever. Of course her parents loved her but they werent as understanding and hardly there. This made the girl upset and frighten. All the others looked at her like she was not even there. She felt as invisible as the air and the way they treated her were as if she was not human. The poor girl wanted to run away because she wanted a great life but she was to afraid. (finish it ... something like that)
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