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what some ppl may call a journal
jus some random stuff, my thoughts, lyrics, poems, ect....
My Love {[Unwanted Poetry]}
Ok's well here's a new poem I'm not sure if its any good so..leave comments or pm me! whether it needs changes or something! haha laters...oh and got any ideas for what i should name this poem??? cuz i'm not sure whether "My Love" is a good title. im never good at titles so..jus hit me up with some!


My love
Oh how it brings joy to myself
To see that wonderful smile
To come across thy lips
With those intoxicating hazel eyes
That resorb into mine yet again
As the day ends
Leaving me utterly remorsed
Til we meet again...






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iEatZombies13
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commentCommented on: Mon Dec 29, 2008 @ 10:59pm
yet again im impressed you did a good job yet again!!! blaugh


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