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Lonlieness Lonlieness To break my heart Rip it apart... Lonlieness To disappear into the deep clear... Lonlieness You stole my life As I now drift towards the white light... Lonlieness I fall and cry As I slowly die... Lonlieness

Posted by: MewMew01 Wed Sep 21, 2005 @ 09:17pm

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HigeTatsuya
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Commented on: Sat Sep 24, 2005 @ 04:41am

Commented on: Sun Oct 09, 2005 @ 09:30pm


	Ver good. I wish mine rymed like yours. here is one if you don't mind. pm me what you think. Through the Darkness Down a dark hallway, I stare. Through the darkness, I peer. Seeing a light, I'm scared. Knowing I'm there, It moves toward me. Now I can't run, I stare. Soon I can't hear, I peer. Not able to breath, I'm scared. Knowing I am there, The light breaks through the darkness.

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Bia-Hakkai
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Commented on: Thu Oct 13, 2005 @ 06:00pm


	great poems 4laugh , why didnt you tell me you wrote poetry to? i cant wait for your next one

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