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Pretty much my poems, and me expressing my self. Maybe even some short stories if your intrested
A girl stepped into a room full of mirrors and in every mirror she saw a flaw on her that she didnt like. This girl was very unhappy, she thought she could never look int the mirror again. Once she saw every flaw, she stepped into another room and this time every mirror she saw was everything good about her. Once she saw all the good things, of course she felt very happy. Realizing that she was actually pretty beautiful the girl started to feel confident. But sadly her weird trip wasnt over, because once she saw all the good things about her she stepped into another room. This was a room filled with pictures. It was a very big room, almost like a mansion. Then in the very corner she saw a girl sobbing (who looked alot like her best friend Maddie). She asked "Whats the matter?" The girl replied "All the pictures you see on the wall are girls who never made it into the 'beautiful mirror' room. The thing is once they saw all there bad flaws, well they couldnt take it they killed themselves, and one of them happend to be my best friend.....You see we are the only girls so far who made it out of there. Its sad how so many girls care about they're looks so much." All of a sudden the girl woke up. Looking around feeling sweaty she realized she was in her room. The thing was she was planning to kill her self that very same day.....





shades of difference
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    Signore Guro
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    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 16, 2008 @ 12:46am
    wow o.o thats a good story. =3 lucky =O


    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 16, 2008 @ 01:20am
    it's nice =3 ... i think you could have worded it a bit different to make it flow more like a river of words even with proper punctuation. also there were a few grammatical/spelling errors that made me twitch but i like the general =3 ... *grammar fairy* ...



    xOmishu_uhsimOx
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    the-mixed-up-cupcake
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    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 16, 2008 @ 04:40pm
    cool!


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