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Inu Speaks
I'll try to keep it brief.
15th
Random little diddy I wrote up during Algebra. It's for Cruci, and I rather hope he enjoys it.

Ailment of Adoration

Salutations to your empathy
With filth encrusted words.
Christen me in your warmth
Of rapidly rising hysteria.
Embrace me with open arms
And a harsh corroded mind.
Love me in your disease
By long fingers of infection.






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Barbara Sexaroid
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 18, 2005 @ 10:38pm
heart I lurve it. I really love the last line, "Love me in your disease by long fingers of infection." But the line, "Christen me in your warmth" I did not like; it seamed a bit blah to me. I give it a 8/10!


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