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Now Comes the Time For It To Be Mine!
Well I'm Into Poetry So it's going to be full of them..
In This Vast Place...
This life is crying
My life wants to be let out
Tears of blood
Come from my soul
My heart starts breaking
My life has cracked
Pieces of my life
Are torn apart
Growing all there life
To end up with nothing
To die with pain
Pain in my life
Drained of love
It has to be gone
Gone forever
In this vast place






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jario maon
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 15, 2008 @ 07:18pm
nice poem. if you want to see my poem, go to www.poetry.com and do an artist search for jeremy frame. I only have one poem submitted...and it was a while ago it's called "Darkness" select the second one, it's unedited(I dont know why they felt they had to edit "hell" out of my poem but they did. the second one also is the full poem... they cut the end off of the first one. well there you have it ^_^


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 23, 2008 @ 03:59pm
nice poem heart



Shadow the Black Rose
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