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i can't ever actually come up with a whole story... just pieces until i get upset that it won't tie together and then i go onto other things...

my current pieces:
1. Now he felt it, that horrible mixture of emotions- desire, jealousy, impotent anger, love, loyalty, loss, sorrow. He felt it all. He wanted to curse God, but he supposed that would only hurt her more...

2. Their eyes met again, and he knew he would lay the world at her feet if it was what she asked of him...

3. "Then perhaps you can finally understand, " she said quietly, "how hard it is for me to know that you still care for her... that you always will."
"I always understood," he said wearily, "it wasn't what i wanted, but it was something I could never change. I still can't, not even now. Anymore than i can change.. how i feel about you"
"Yes." Her voice was scarcely more than a whisper. "That's what i finally understand."
(ps: this isn't about anyone in paricular i promise)

and this is my favorite... lol but it's much longer
4. "I loved her." he heard his voice break. "I always loved her."
"She loved you too," she whispered against his hair. "I could see it"
"I didn't..."
"I know...."
Her hand moved across his chest and into the neckline of his worn shirt. He felt his head swim and his vision fade before he remembered to keep breathing. Her breath was warm on his neck, her cheek rubbing softly against his hair. He was trembling with waves of instinct and emotion that howled to be released.
"Are you sure about this?" he whispered.
"Yes," she murmured, smoothing her hands down his sides to find the hem of his shirt.
He stopped her from pulling it up. "What about..."
"Don't," she said, tugging the garment out of his grasp and sliding it up his back. "Don't bring anything else in here with us."
"No," he agreed, feeling the hot hush of need flow through him unguarded now. "Nothing else. No one but us."
Her palms were warm against his skin as she pushed his shirt up. The night air on his naked back had never felt so soft before, so full of promise. She tossed it aside as he turned to her, still seated and...
there's lots more of that one, but unless you're dying to know i'll leave it off
...what do you think?