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Hole in my head
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Alone in fog(one big poem)
Alone

The fog of time overwhelms me.
It brings in memories of people,
and takes them away just as quick.
In the end I am all alone.

The memories of you are the sharpest,
But they also hurt me the most.
Sad and alone you have left me,
to wallow in the image of your ghost.

As time commences your image grows dimmer,
And one day you’ll be gone forever.
Even though this feeling is haunting,
I do not mind.
I feel that I’ll follow you shortly,
into the fog of time.






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fallenleaaves-
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 11, 2008 @ 05:25am
Woah.. that was amazing.


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 08:36pm
Wow very deep. I love how you use Fog as a symbol for depression and death, or well thats how I thought of it as! Its really great! Keep on writting!



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xXxtheLillianAlicexXx
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 27, 2008 @ 01:04am
you really good at pomes makes me want to get better with my writeing


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DeletedbyJH
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 01, 2008 @ 05:14am
In every poem you write, it's about an certain individual. Who is it? neutral


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 10, 2008 @ 11:06pm
you're a really good poet!! 3nodding



cccKrazy Ninja
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iseemoney
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 12, 2008 @ 12:39am
Your really good in poems.


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 18, 2008 @ 10:53pm
I like your poem. ^_^ It's really good. You should check out my Journal. I think you'll like it. ^^



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Sweet Lovely_kisser
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 06, 2009 @ 03:13pm
O_o emo
but very good > <
I like it
I can relate


commentCommented on: Thu Mar 19, 2009 @ 12:22am
crying
is really good poem, sers.sdeep wink cry smile



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phatt kid
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 05, 2009 @ 07:29am
DUDE eek
that is deep to be compleetly honest u kinda kreeped me out 4 a sec
but all in all awesome


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