so kirsten gave me back the printed out version of my story that goes up to page 47 (im up to 57 now) EVEN THO SHE'S NOT DONE WITH IT!!!!!!!!!! PLUS it has one of those AWESUM booky marky thingys in it! so if u wanna take that and read ahead u can. 3nodding ......wow, im trying to figure out wut part to put up here and im gettin VERY confused..... oook i got it now.
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“It took me forever to get him up!” Nicolas said as he crossed the room to get to a chair. Zack just mumbled something under his breath.
“Alright, we need a foolproof plan. We can’t mess around, this is serious. We’ve already slacked off enough.” Nicolas announced.
“Well, maybe we could tell her that we’ll only give up Harrold if she gives Derrick up first.” Laura suggested. “Then she’ll give up Derrick and we’ll just run away.”
“Are you stupid? She wasn’t born yesterday, she wouldn’t fall for that!” Valerie said, shaking her head.
“Maybe after we do the switch, I can figure out some way to escape.” Harrold said.
“That plan is too risky. We have no guarantee that you’d be able to escape. We have no guarantee that they’d even keep you alive long enough to even think of a way to escape.” Carina pointed out.
“We don’t even know if Madrina will give Derrick back. She might just kill him.” Nicolas added.
“You know, this kinda sounds like capture the flag.” Zack seemed to have woken up enough to help. “I mean, think about it. Harrold is like our flag, and Derrick is Madrina’s. If this really was a game, wouldn’t we be trying to sneak over to Madrina’s side to try and steal her flag before she got ours without being seen?”
“I still don’t understand.” Laura said.
“It’s like this; all we have to do is take Derrick back without Madrina noticing. Then when we go to trade, she’ll end up having nothing to give us in return for Harrold and so we won’t give Harrold up.” Zack explained. “Pretty much like capture the flag if you think about it.”
“You are definitely smarter than you look.” Nicolas smiled.
“Eh, it’s a gift.” Zack said, shrugging his shoulders.
“You must’ve played capture the flag a lot right?” Carina asked.
“Yeah, my older sister and I would. Every time we were really bored we used to play that game together. We played capture the flag so many times, but it didn’t matter how many times we played, she would always make it interesting.” Zack said with a small smile.
“What’s your sister’s name?” Laura asked.
“Her name was Elizabeth.”
“Was?” Harrold asked.
“Yeah. She died when Madrina took over.” Zack said quietly.
I have the BIGGEST urge to draw Zack now.....i think i will..... yeeeah next page is pretty much a bit of Zack's past then we go back to Derrick and see wut kinda party he's havin o btw, kara's been putting her name in at random places and i've tried to catch them all but if i miss one let me no pls! thx!!!
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I love this story SOOOOOO much. If it were a real, published book that i had to go to a book store and buy with my own money, I would totally do it! Yeah, you heard me, I'd totally pay to read this awesome-nesss. Who wouldn't? But I'm REALLLY glad that you are such a good friend and allow me to read it for free (even though you could've been rich by now) xd .
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU!
lol aspergurs. lol