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=-_Love me true_-= Dying when trying and failing at the end, taken by surprise with every line she spins. Hoping for her love and ended up losing her friendship a mistake made out of love, a race lost in the end. Eternal love wasted like left over food, treated as nothing like my existence is to you. Find myself praying for death but finding it's promise to me was never really left. No peace to be found just razors on the ground filled with promises of blood and healing with a chance for a merciful death dealing. Lying to myself swearing that it's true that somehow in the end baby I'll end up with you, though miles apart you had me from the start yet I lost you in the end but the haunting question in my mind is if I have you now or if I even had you then. My sin unending because my sin is loving you, burning in my personal hell for giving in to a love so true. Set me free darling, let me be with you, you are my Heaven my refuge so true--I cannot live and I cannot die when I am without you. Show me the way to your heart or to your knife because I cannot handle this painful existence, this unending strife. All I wanted was you, maybe some love and a kiss or two--But what I found was a broken heart and a soul with a sword stabbed right through... Set me free my heaven, my love so true--set me free and forever I'll be with you.

Posted by: -[Wetty McPants]- Wed Jun 08, 2005 @ 09:49pm

[b:bceddf4f0a]Who I am[/b:bceddf4f0a]
I'm the unyielding in character
The undying in faith
The unrelenting in love
and the desire of your heart.
My voice flows like blood,
and heals like rain.
You will never understand me,
but it [i:bceddf4f0a]will[/i:bceddf4f0a] be your dying wish
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Kouya Sakagami
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Commented on: Thu Jun 09, 2005 @ 02:03am


	Gyuu I like. ^^ Go git something published, hun. >B

Commented on: Thu Jun 09, 2005 @ 02:49am


	huggles Feel better soon my dear. I'm worried about you. heart

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Flight Thirteen
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Commented on: Fri Jun 10, 2005 @ 01:18am


	This poem makes me have many different types of feelings. You have some really deep feeling for someone your age which means you are very mature but still can be silly sometimes. I'm going to be honest I have a broken heart it has many pandie bandaids on it, on the inside I think of many horrible things to happen to me the thing that keeps me alive and happy on the outside is knowing people like you. There is a few people that I know I couldn't stand to live without ............... TBC ............ being kicked off computer

Commented on: Fri Jun 10, 2005 @ 01:31am


	wee sweet. whee surprised

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Sky-sama
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Commented on: Fri Jun 10, 2005 @ 03:39am


	Caleb, darling.. Are you okie? -Hugglish- gonk heart

Commented on: Sat Jun 11, 2005 @ 04:10am


	<center> sweatdrop </center>

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The Spill Canvas
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Commented on: Sat Jun 11, 2005 @ 07:45pm


	Pwetty. I think Caleb should do something with this...

Commented on: Wed Jun 15, 2005 @ 06:55am


	<center>i seriously hope thats not about whom i think it is. ><</center>

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Rissykinns
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Commented on: Wed Jun 29, 2005 @ 02:17am


	Awesome poem. It flows rather nicely.

Commented on: Wed Jun 29, 2005 @ 09:30am


	That was probably the most spectacular thing I've ever read.

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Commented on: Sat Jul 30, 2005 @ 12:39am


	D= ~* <3

Commented on: Tue Aug 02, 2005 @ 05:17am


	that is so sweet... really moving... well done

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Oceria
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Commented on: Tue Oct 18, 2005 @ 03:54am


	You need to publish stuff like that.

Commented on: Sun Jul 29, 2007 @ 07:20pm


	Wow. (yes, I know this is random... don't ask how I found you) I haven't read such amazing poetry by a guy before... I actually feel the pain and passion in this. Bravo.

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Commented on: Sun Nov 22, 2009 @ 06:44am


	you are such a good writer babe <3

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