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I'm a guy and yes I like poetry. So read and leave a comment.
I felt like making this poem. It just came to me. So, I did it down in my journal. Leave me a comment to let me know if you like it or not. No need for a comment, but I want one, so please??? ;-;??

I will let the wind;
Break my fall.
Just to hear,
The sound of the hurricanes call!
Through smoke and fire,
All the fields,
Left me but not,
What is left to yield.
I frame my disgrace,
As I flee from this place.
This place I set fire to alone,
This place I once called my home.
I feel remorse,
I endure regret,
I lift up my head
To say "It'll get better yet!"
I confess what I've done,
I will never runaway,
I will stand and face the cross,
To hear what my punishment is,
For what I did that day!
I walk through the burnt fields of what I did that day,
I absorb the regret,
A single tear sheds from my eye,
to hear one another's voice say,
"It'll get better yet."






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-Auxilium-
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 14, 2007 @ 07:48pm
Actually, I'm impressed, I never really see any good poetry on gaia.


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 14, 2007 @ 09:53pm
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That's a pretty poem ;o;
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Squishey-Squish
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