heres the continuation of my poem
(set 1) Now that the rain has passed, i never thought that i could last. a moment without my great past turns out that im not so fast...
watching here in the sunshine walking in a very long line
following my heart and its desires a deadly dragon that breathes fires
(chorus) O where is thou that helped me through! Where is that land of all of you? Im dancing here all by my self.. like a ninja in the night without his stealth.. When i die there will be time to remember you with all my rhymes just wait, youll see my sweet sweet victory
(set 2) give me that good-bye kiss feeling like ill never be missed.
please come help me if you can im not your very average man
i need some love and cherishment like owl with night and with content
please... save me....
(chorus)
yea, i kinda think it was ruined but its hard to make things rhyme, plus i dont care what people think, except for the ones i love most..
king evigmorke · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 01:28am · 2 Comments |