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Rambling's of an Shadow
Randomness, things I want to say, life updates, and what ever comes to mind......
A poem....
If I....



If I was to fly,
I'd jump off a cliff
to see if someone would save me.

If I was to swim,
I'd swim to the depths
to see if someone would find me.

If I was to die,
I'd wait
to see if someone missed me.

If I was to cry,
I'd watch
to see if someone cared.

If I was to fall,
I'd hope
to see if someone would catch me.

If I was to change,
I'd listen
to see if someone wanted "me" back.

If I was to leave,
I'd think,
Would someone come get me?...........






User Comments: [3]
pancakes_n_frenchfries
Community Member





Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 05:17am


*that's so true*


Wind_Drake
Community Member





Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 08:47pm


I like it. It has a simple format that stays constant through the whole thing until the last line... with the 'If I' first, then 'I'd', then the longer line. It's deep and well written. Congrats, it's a good poem. mrgreen


VincentHanyou
Community Member





Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 09:34pm


That actually quite touching


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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