Sink or Swim

• Artist: Misery Is Love
• Description: How I feel towards my life at this point and how I feel about most of my friends and family
• Date: 12/15/2011
• Tags: sink swim

Grasping
Pulling
The chains that bind us
To reality

I can't help
But to hate you all
I can't help but despise you
For not caring

You were supposed to be
My friends
What is a friend?
I habe no experience to know

The death-cool fingers
Of my anxiety
Dragging me into the depths
Of depression

Sinking further
Under it's cool waves
Only on problem
Reaches my thoughts from the multitude:
'I don't know how to swim.'

Comments

[XxMissBellaxX]

"Reaches my thoughts from the multitude"
i wish this line was shorter, but I really like this poem, i like how from beginning to end you have the same rhythm. I think it could be improved, but I don’t know what advice to give you to make it better. 4/5