Flying

• Artist: DorkBee
• Description: This is my first peom.I know it's not all that good and you don't have to like it.I wouldn't get offended.Altough I would like at least one good rating.
  
• Date: 05/03/2009
• Tags: flying

There are so many things we can do,
Run,
Skip,
Hop,
Write,
Learn,
Speak,
And much,much more
But theres one thing we can't do that's on the tip of my tounge,
Fly.
Wouldn't it be nice to sore though the air.
Wouldn't be nice to feel the air though your hair,
The thrill of being so high in the sky,
Wouldn't it be nice to fly.

Comments

[Purumi]

It'd be amazing to fly! -imagines it- Hahahaha... now you've got me thinking!

[Sadistic_Meow]

As your first poem i love it!!
the poem is simple,sweet and it is the truth another reason why i love it is because it dose not talk about how messed up someones life is or how depressed they are and want to die!!
great job!!