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“Come with me”
He called soothingly
“You’ve obeyed my commands
Come take my hands”
It seemed so easy yet hard
“I can be your eternal guard”
His voice like needles pierced my soul
Eternal life that was my goal
His eyes shone bright like the sun
My heart, he had already won,
Was beating loud as a drum
“Do you want to come?”
A question this time
Would it be a crime to leave all else behind?
What could I find,
More important than him,
Especially when life was dim?
I had seen the scars on his hands and feet
When did we last meet?
I remembered his smile
Although it had been awhile
I finally answered with a simple nod
For I was in the presence of God
- Title: Savior
- Artist: resachirp
- Description: Well we wrote poetry books in class and this was my narrative hope ya like it ^^
- Date: 03/25/2009
- Tags: savior christ
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxxVampirePandaChanxxX - 05/11/2009
- Oh, yeah! I remember this... at the end I was like O.o cuz I thought it was a vampire!
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- Stephells the Soviet - 03/26/2009
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Very good I like it
Nice use of words - Report As Spam