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Aha!
I wrote this,
it's in tetrameter.
yes, i learned that term in english class mrgreen
well it's about two lovers,
that have died together.
and well they are speaking about how thy're dead and they still love each other 3nodding
please rate fairly mrgreen
- by Andrea Vicious Bellamy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/18/2009 |
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- Title: Love Is Not A Crime
- Artist: Andrea Vicious Bellamy
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Description:
This time we spend beneath their feet
Not bound by rings or shiny things
But by a love that is defeat
Our hearts are more than just some meat
One day will we arise from dead?
Or is this our eternal bed
As long as you are with me dear
Cause my heart my soul needs you here
I’d rather live without a life
than live a life that is not right
for you and I are meant to be
I meant that for eternity
Hello there reader of this line,
Remember love is not a crime
- Date: 02/18/2009
- Tags: love crime
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Jolene023 - 03/01/2009
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Sad yet hopeful at the same time-I like it!
Just a suggestion: when you submitted this poem you seem to have gotten the 'Description' field and the 'Content' field mixed up.
But great poem! - Report As Spam