misunderstood

• Artist: LordTaco13
• Description: i noticed lately that i am not the best person i can be. not at all. i take advantage of others, and that is horrible, im trying to change though, and i hope it comes through. wish me luck...
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: disappointment evil unfaithful

why do all the good ones die young,
it is not their fault,
they're the ones that help,
but are not helped in return,
promises were not kept,
not kept.............
leading to an unravished death.........

it is the evil that should die,
leaving the good,
out of the light,
blinding them of sight.
dark and unfaithful,
wreched and mean,
they ARE infact,
the ones robbing the scene,
blaming the innocent,
killing the good,
angels they are not, but only.......


misunderstood.........

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I agree with you. Kinda really crappy. Not worse than that. Lacks that creative edge. It is weak in imagery and imaginative lines in general.

[LordTaco13]

thank you! but the poems is kinda really crappy, some of it doesnt make sense, cuz i was really tired when i wrote it, and im a really bad rhymer...(sp?)

[Aqeroth]

good job Katie im too arogant too have ever written that and addmitted my flaws.

[larsop03]

nice