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Tears dropped from my eyes as you drew your last breath.
I remembered all of the wonderful memories you left me with,
But it was still painful to see you pass.
I couldn’t help myself from crying on your cold shoulder,
I felt so alone and so lost,
Yet I knew I had the strength to drag on through my life.
I should have made you like me,
A creature that could never die,
A creature of the night.
I shook that thought away,
Knowing you would be unhappy if I had,
And would live in eternal sorrow.
I walked away,
Leaving you to nature,
And to become one with the earth itself.
All I had left were those memories,
Those of love and passion,
And those of caring and happiness.
Those memories would remain deep within my still heart
Frozen in time and space
Never to be released to anyone.
I will remain distant and cold,
I will never have those emotions toward anyone,
Those special emotions will only be for you.
- by Incubi Shiki |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/24/2008 |
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- Title: Frozen Emotions
- Artist: Incubi Shiki
- Description: This is a poem I wrote not too long ago basically about a vampire loosing a person he loved due to mortality.
- Date: 11/24/2008
- Tags: frozen emotions
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Comments (5 Comments)
- shirou_aine29 - 06/11/2009
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great one. n_n
i'd appreciate it too if you also rate me back n_n - Report As Spam
- Miyaka Hana - 02/15/2009
- I liked it. ^_^ Although, I'm not very big and keen on the vampire subject, it was still very well written, and I enjoyed it. ^_^ Was it a freestyle, or what? Lol. Great job, again. 4/5
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- Sammi Sha Jay - 11/27/2008
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wow that was deep and soooo beautiful. i agree w/ jenna, plz make more!
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- SaD-CooKiEs - 11/27/2008
- T~T (crys) OMG It's so beutufull I give u 100000000100000000 =D Make more please ^,.,^
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- I Wanna Brownie - 11/27/2008
- SHMEXII. Totaly lovein it, dude.
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