Love

• Artist: Mud99
• Description: Just a poem about one of my relationships. If you can't tell it went badly.
  
  My first post! Love it, hate it, just say something.
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: love

I love you
You know I do
Would I die for you?

Only if you die for me.

I love you
You know I do
Would I walk through fire for you?

Only if you burn for me.

I love you
You know I do
Would i ever fight for you?

Only if you fight me.

Comments

[Bleuraven123]

you really ARE heartbroken... ooooh...
poor you... Nice poem, by the way

[Mud99]

I didn't think it was that good. 3/5

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Mud, I understand your heartbreak! Your touching poem of lost love, really hit a nerve. I almost teared up. keep writing such heartfelt poems! 2/5.

[Shadows-and-Shade]

that is a kind little story
its about u going through stuff 4 each other
but together in a sense

[LadyKrystine]

I really like it. It's kind of sad, but there's a real emotion behind it. Well, at least that's what I'm picking up on.

4/5