yearning

• Artist: aqua0garrett
• Description: I REMAIN STILL IN PAIN,
  ALL MY ATTEMMPTS OF
  LIVING LIFE WITHOUT YOU
  WERE IN VAIN AND POINTLESS.
  
  I'M ALWAYS NEEDING
  BUT NEVER WANTING
  AND FOREVER YEARNING
  FOR YOUR LIPS TO GRAZE
  MINE LIKE WHISPERING
  BROOKS ON LOUD AND
  OBNOXIOUS CLIFFS
  AND BLUFFS.
  
  WARM AND INVITING
  I LONG YOUR ARMS TO
  BE MY BLANKET IN A
  SNOWSTORM OF
  PASSION.
  
  I NEED YOU TO WANT
  TO LOVE MY VOICE
  AND TRUST MY EYES
  AND BELIEVE MY KISS
  AND TOUCH WHEN I
  WHISPER TO YOUR SOUL...
  
  I LOVE YOU.
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: yearning

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Comments

[Moo Forever]

I think it was a great poem. Kind of same themes as mine. And people need to learn to open their minds and not be so critical.

[possum fool]

you guys are total assholes;
how could you bash on someones poetry like that?
poetry is someones thoughts and creativity,
you have no right to call it s**t.

[tksunshine93]

What is wrong with all of you?!?! (Except for you CrimsonRosePetal)
It makes sense and it's not crap!!!
It's hopelessly romantic and in my opinion well done!!
And sure the caps weren't necessary but the feel and emotion of the poem is made more obvious that way!
Again I say well done! It takes a lot of courage to put your work up like this! So, aqua0garrett, I applaud you!!

[Piggyzilla]

I am sorry to say it but it is a really bad poem. Also you might have noticed that you switched the poem and description. Sorry, but I really did not like it.

[Kagome the Preistess111]

this is dumb... why did I waste this precious time on stupid crap like that also you switched the poem and description so I'm not gonna even vote

[MUSIC_IS_FOR3V3R]

i didnt like it

[Nano Eternity]

This is s**t. I hate the caps (its annoying) and it just doesn't make any freaking sense.