an insane haunting

• Artist: Pheonix_J
• Description: i love to write dark poetry...so here you are...
  i think that some people mistake a "haunting" or a "ghost" for thier own mind playing tricks on them.. idk...kinda dreary lol
• Date: 11/16/2008
• Tags: insane haunting

i can feel you under my skin
messing with my mind
feeling me from within...
leaving me blind

you can hear my thoughts
my mind isnt mine anymore
with all the insanity you brought...
my body is no longer a locked door

i can feel your touch...
haunting me at night
even if it is a slight brush
i can always feel you by my side

my bed feels cold
even when i am in it for hours
you freeze anything you hold
even if it is newly bloomed flowers

you kill off anything good
leaving me empty
as if that is how my life
should be...

who are you? who could you be?
i look in the mirror..
and ask the face staring back at me...

Comments

[Sweet Nanne]

wow

[Yoruichi_i-sama]

good

[kerima1510]

Condense some of your words. It's freeform poetry, so it's ok to say it's, or I'm. It helps the flow and makes the poem seem more realistic when you use words the way you'd say them. I havn't met anyone that says I am anymore. I like the theme though.