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The rain pounds,
The drum sounds,
Battle cries,
A soldier dies,
Bullets fly like darts,
Causing bleeding hearts,
Another woman made a widow,
As a memory fades to a shadow,
The battle rages on,
Another life gone,
They dig another grave,
For the soldier so brave,
The rain pounds,
The drum sounds,
Battle cries,
A soldier dies.
- by Dragon_of_Eternal_light |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/04/2008 |
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- Title: War
- Artist: Dragon_of_Eternal_light
- Description: A poem I wrote for clas one day and decided to put it on here.
- Date: 10/04/2008
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- much ado about nothing - 12/22/2008
- I think this is pretty good, only(if you don't mind a little critique) you could take the "a" out of "As a memory fades to (a) shadow", and change the last line to "yet another soldier dies". Then it would be great! 5 stars anyways!
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