The Abyss

• Artist: Evanescence_Sasuke-luver
• Description: this is another free write i did... i also used a qoute from the song 'Whiskey lullaby' enjoy
• Date: 05/17/2009
• Tags: abyss

The Abyss...
Dark, cold, nothingness...
I drown in my own sorrowfull abyss...
Nobody cared about me anymore...
'Hopeless...'
'Nothing...'
'Not worth my time...'
The only person I thought would care about me...
Betrayed me
Right before he passed away...
I held on to a picture of him...
As I slam the cold, sharp metal through my skin...
I hear the lyrics in my head...
"We found her with her face down in the pillow...
Clinging to his picture for dear life...
We laid her next to him beneath the willow...
While the angels sang a whiskey lullaby..."

Comments

[Ritsmi]

really good.

[m u s ii q u e]

Ok I suppose. I'm not a very poetic person. The nearest I get to poetry is screaming 'Hey that sentence rhymed!' On a whim. Completely random.

[Haiizel Nut]

I still love this!

[Haiizel Nut]

Its really good. and good description. Check out my stuff too <//3 5/5

[Evanescence_Sasuke-luver]

ty biggrin

[Reaver the Reaper]

good, very good, hey commit my work too, plus commit my cosplay avater and rate it a 5 or 4, iam cosplaying yoru from shugo chara, type in shugo chara