- "Oh my god, did you see Audrey's hair"? Vanessa asked Destiny, laughing in between words. "Yah, it looks like her hairbrush had a heart attack", Destiny replied. The two best friends laughed untill they couldnt breathe. Gasping for breath, they continued walking down the street. They were headed for Vanessa's house, which was only a block from Destiny's unle's. Audrey Curtis's hair was always a tangled mess, but today it had to be the worst. "oh, and lets not forget her choice of shoes", Vanessa added. Audrey's shoes never matched and were always looking extremly tacky. Today, she chose to wear a plain white shoe on one foot and a green the color of puke with brown on the other. Destiny was just about to make a comment, when all of a sudden a scream pierced through the air. Destiny and Vanessa turned at the same time to find a woman sprawled on the ground, blood oozing from her left leg. A man standing beside her held a gun above her, her purse in his hand. Destiny couldnt see anything of the woman, except she was scrawny, white skin, and black hair that was slicked back in a high ponytail. The man was tall, african american, broad shoulders, and muscles the sizes of trees. The woman was just about to scream, but the man put the gun to her head, and yelled "Dont f****** do it, unless you want your other leg shot b****." The woman closed her mouth, silent tears streaming down her face. A toyota suddenly screeched from the corner and paused where the man was. The man rushed to the passenger side and climbed in. His window rolled all the way down, the driver started to speed away but the theif put up his hand as an indication to stop. The driver obeyed the command as if he was a dog obeying his masters command. The theifs eyes met Destinys. Then Vanessa's hand gripped Destiny's arm. "Run", Vanessa said in a panicked whisper. Vanessa and Destiny both broke into a run,breaking the eye contact with the theif. The two bff's didnt even know where they were running to, they just kept running. They could hear the car right on their heels. "Destiny, look out"! Vanessa suddenly yelled, pushing Destiny sideways. Destiny stumbled and smacked against a gate. The sound of a gun being shot roared the air, and Destiny braced for the pain.
- by KatherinexPierce |
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- | Submitted on 01/27/2010 |
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- Title: One step closer
- Artist: KatherinexPierce
- Description: This is the rest of Chapter one.
- Date: 01/27/2010
- Tags: step closer
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- XxNeos MuffinxX - 01/27/2010
- Very good, makes the reader want to know more. 4/5
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