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Llaria's POV
I ran down the dark alleyways and the flooded streets.I couldn't take this anymore.My parents are dead,my grandfather and grandmother died of cancer.Now,I found my boyfriend,my one and only love in this world kissing another woman.The rain came down even harder as I ran to the bridge."Llaria,please wait!" Someone screamed behind me.I turned around to find a man boy standing there breathlessely.I cried even harder when I saw it was Max."I don't want to see your face ever again." I said between sobs."It wasn't what it looked like!She came on to me and I tried to pull her away!" He said.I could begin to see warm tears outline his eyes."I love you,Llaria.Please believe me." He said as a tear gently made it's way down his face.I felt my whole body go limp."As much as I want to believe you,I can't.This has happened to many times before." I said.It was true,as soon as my third boyfriend cheated on me,I promised myself not to love anyone ever again.It was a warm Saturday and I was sitting in the shade of the big oak tree.I was reading my book when a soccer ball rolled up beside me."Sorry I-" The boy said.He stopped mid-sentance and looked at me."My name's Max." He held out his hand and smiled."M-mine's Llaria." I said as I shook his hand."Llaria,what a beautiful name.It suites you." I blushed and smiled. Oh no,more tears."Llaria,please.Just come back home and we can fix everything." This boy did not give up,did he? "No,I can't.I don't want to be hurt anymore than I already am.I'm sorry,Max." I said almost in a whisper."No,your not going to do anything stupid.Are you?" He asked.I tried to look at him to give him the message.He shook his head and said "No,please." I attempted to run away but he quickly grabbed my arm."Let me go!" I said struggling in his grip."I understand what you're going through.Just forget about everything and come home!" My anger was getting to me.Why doesn't he understand?"No,your just like everyone else!You try to understand me,but no one knows what it's like.Don't try to fix me.I'm permantly broken!" My anger seemed to suprise him and he loosened his grip.As soon as he loosened up I ran.And of course he ran after me.This was it,I was at the bridge and about to climb on top of it.I could see his face.He looked heartbroken and pleading.He mothed the word 'please' but I shook my head.I carefully climbed up the rungs of the ladder and I soon was at the top of the bridge.I suddenly felt two arms around my waist."Please,I love you so much." Max whispered in my ear.I turned around and gave him one last kiss.I turned back around and was looking at the deep,cold waters below.I turned my head to him. "I love you,too." And with that being said,I jumped.I soon as my body was submerged it the icy water,I couldn't feel my body.I was numb,my mind went blank and my eyes slowly closed.That was it,I was gone.Forever.
Max's POV
"Llaria!" I screamed.She was gone forever and no one could fix that.I began to cry again and I fell to my knees."Why?" I whispered.I fell asleep on the top of the bridge that night.I woke up the next morning to the sound of sirens.I looked down and saw her dead body.She was covered up rom toe to neck. and her skin was pale.I quickly climbed down from the bridge and ran over to the scene."Excuse me,sir" I said "Where did you find this body?" It was an obvious question for me but I was curious."We found it earlier this morning floating down the stream here." He said. "Do you know her?" The old man asked. I nodded my head and said "She was my girlfriend." I began to feel fresh tears in my eyes.I walked over to her and kneeled down before her. Her lips were a shade of pale blue and she was cold.Her chest didn't rise and fall,it remained still.Her blonde hair was messy and damp.Her make up was messed up and her eyes were closed hiding her now lifeless icy blues.This was the end.
1 month later...
I was at her funeral.She was dressed in a beatiful white dress and her makeup was done.Her hair was brushed out.She was laying in a casket at the funeral home.A few of her closest friends and the remaining close faimly members were there.As the preacher spoke everyone was crying,even me.After the ceremony,we went to her headstone and they buried her.All of the memories flooded back to me."Awww,you got me the necklace!" Llaria said and she gave me a kiss."You made this my best birthday ever!" She gave me a hug and put on the necklace.The last good memory I could remember the best was her sevententh birtday a couple of months ago.When everyone left,I stayed at her headstone.I wrote with a sharpie on the back of her headstone."I love you forever and always,baby."-Max.
- by Llaria Lushious |
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- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Goodbye,Friend
- Artist: Llaria Lushious
- Description: I cried while writing this.It was a dream I had last night and I thought it would make a good story.BTW,the part where everything is in itailics means its a flashback.I reccomend listening to the song 'Hello' by Evanescence
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: help goodbye death sadness
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- PuNkRoCkPrInCeSs30 - 12/24/2008
- That was a very sad story...i almost cried! good job, i write stories i get from my dreams somtimes too 5/5! Your should read mine...its sad right now its called love at first sight
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- sunshine_sweetie28 - 12/10/2008
- Omg That is the saddest Story I`m Like about to cry but my brothers sitting in the next room.
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