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Alrighty, I've written poetry and I feel really bad 'cause I stopped writing it, 'cause I thought that I sucked, but now you guys can tell me what you think of it and if I should continue to write. You look around and see her
Black hair beautiful brown eyes
You look around and see her
But never answer to her crys
Looking around so happy, so chipper, so sweet
You'd never guess she's dying inside
Choking,gagging,falling to her feet
She would never admit defeat
Sitting alone on the other side of the room,
Sweeping away her sorrows with an old broken broom
Wiping her eyes and seeing the light
Settle her down from those cold scary nights
Although she is broken
and tattered inside
she hides it well
from the naked eye
So what did you guys think. I thought it sucked alot...but everyone is like "oh that poem is so beautiful...."Anywho, I'm gonna go to bed I'm tired, Good night friends and don't forget to tell me what you TRUTHFULLY think of that poem.
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 Peprika · Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 09:53am · 0 Comments |
