Edited on: May 19th Yay! Finally! this week has been hectic and I apologize for not getting this up on time! >_< I have a wedding to go to and I've been scurrying around looking for clothes and shoes + working + finishing commishes! >_< Well, it's finally up nd I'm happy to say that this will not delay the next page on the 23rd. I'm happy for those who have stuck by me... you should all know by now what a procrastinator I am anyways! lol
Well, I recycled a few images from my chapter openers and my front page of BOWBS. Recognize Alba? The reason why I'm permitting myself to do so is cause soon, there will be a new cover page in the very first entry of BOWBS! Stay tuned for that! Also, I'm aware of certain anatomical flaws... but i had to get this page out in hurry! xp
Next Page:the 23rd of MAY
Here are the names of the contestants that have passed the second round of the contest!
Here are the names of the participants that have made it through the second round of the contest! xd
Yay! You've told me a bit about yourself. You said why you think you should be in BOWBS, you've told me about how you'd interact with the characters now it's time to put YOUR imagination to the test! That's right folks! As part of the 10 finalists that have made it to round 2, you're all going to tell me how your character would go in to order a commssion from BOWBS!
Now, I don't want information on how your character is because that has been sent to me already! I want you to write a 3rd person (meaning the narration has to not be from any of the characters *including you*) story on what it would be like if you character went to BOWBS to place an order.
The order can be about any of the services that BOWBS provides: Art, coloration, story writing or specialized promotion (Alba's job). It can also include more then one. Ex: art + story
It must be 250-350 words (I will reject anything outside of those limits) and have a 3rd person narrative. This has to be WELL WRITTEN! SPELL CHECK PLEASE!! And PLEASE add punctuation! You can make anything happen as long as its in character with the employees. Good luck and I must have it by: Wednesday the 23rd of May at 12am Pmed to with with: BOWBS Contest pt3 in the title.
Only 5 will be left after the decisions are made! Good luck everyone! ~*Bella*~
They're all beautiful people! xp Lovely end to the chapter, however. 3nodding
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snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Fri May 19, 2006 @ 08:57pm
I love the ending and JB looks adorable (and cocky at the same time)
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Julina Lynch · Community Member · Sat May 20, 2006 @ 06:28am
Thats a great way to end a chapter ^_^
And of course xp great art as ALWAYS xd
And even though I am not a part of the contest (*sob* I meissed it crying)
Part three seems slightly difficult o.o
Well, good luck to all who entered biggrin
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Thdark · Community Member · Sat May 20, 2006 @ 07:10pm
I love the group shot. I think Bella's hair stands out a lot though. It's a helluva lot more detailed than the rest of the image. There's nothing wrong with detail, but I think the hair takes away from the image. If you wanted to keep the hair that detailed, you probably should've added detail to other characters' hair or to the clothing.
I can see the hair trying to draw attention to Bella, who is kind of the central figure on this page. She's also the one speaking. However, it draws attention strictly to itself.
Beyond that, the detail in the hair is lovely. The group shot looks very nice. I will say that Alba looks a little off to his own side, but I like JB's hand drawing him into the crowd. Good work.heart
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Sagando Mirasta · Community Member · Sun May 21, 2006 @ 06:15am
Awwwwww!!!! That's soooooo cute and I love how you made it like we as the previewer are the character being welcomed. Really neat!
Every character look really good too. Love the pants and folds. Hair and eyes! The banner! Everything!
You flowed quite nicely and you introduce the characters well enough to get the viewers attached. I know I am looking forward to more and I hope I will get to see more!
Now I need to check on this contest I am afraid I missed. cry
Well, I like it! lol I like how you ended this Bella. Very final in a way but it also sort of leads you on well into the next chapter. ^^ I'm excited! Now that all the formalities are done, the real story can begin xd
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Tue May 23, 2006 @ 07:16am
yay.... stare
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Wed May 24, 2006 @ 11:00pm
-licks the page- luffffff
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DearCervid · Community Member · Tue Sep 30, 2008 @ 07:17pm
Aw, your manga is cute. I love the drawing style! <3