Lemmie start by introducing the main characters. Eric is me Rin Synoske, Brandon is my bro Akayo Kanachi, Tyrell is Shintoga, and John is a friend of ours who doesnt have internet :{ OK on with the story.
MILENCHU
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Hey, my name is Eric. I dont know my last name because you see, I dont know my parents. Ive never known my true origins. The only family I have is my grandmother and my sister Michelle (Whom I love dearly) also my 3 best friends: Brandon(short temper), Tyrell(secluded goth), and John(prankster). It seemed as though my life was goin pretty well.... I couldnt have been more wrong! I was about to discover something about myself that I never could've predicted. This is my story....
"My friends constantly tell me that I have a split personality, but I never paid it any mind"
"School bell rings"
Eric: Brandon better hurry up! Hes already late, again.
John: What else is new? He's failing for sure.
Brandon: I heard that you little b*****d!!!
Teacher: Oh, Mr. Dorsey, you've decided to grace us with your presence today?
Brandon: Sorry it wont happen again.
Eric: Sup Brandon (gives five)
Brandon: Wassup Bro, sup Tyrell...
John: Oh I see how it is.
Brandon: You say something Whore?!
(John and Brandon get in each others faces)
Teacher:Both of you sit down and SHUT UP!!
John: We'll finish this after school.
Brandon: You'd better be there!
Tyrell: Are you too serious?
Eric: You two wont fight, youre both chumps! HA HA
Brandon/John: SHUT UP ERIC!!
Teacher: You four DETENTION!!!!
Us: AHHHH! Not Detention!!
sweatdrop Hey all I hope you guys are enjoyin this Ive been writting it for weeks and am glad I can finnally share it with you all. sweatdrop
(Later that day after detention)
Tyrell:How do I always get dragged into this stuff?
Eric: Yea you two need to quit.
Brandon:You ready to do this whore?!
John sad charges at brandon)
Brandon sad swings)
(They both hit each other at the same time)
John: Ya feel that!
Brandon: I should be askin you the same question.
(They continue fighting)
Mysterious voice: Rin? Is that you?
Eric sad turns around to see a figure peeking out from behind a tree)Who are you and why'd you call me that?
Mysterious voice: How'd you know I was referring to you?
Eric confused
Eric: Well are you talkin to me or what?!
Mysterious voice: If my eyes still serve my right then yes Rin Im talking to you.
Brandon/John: (Stop fighting and look over)
Eric: Me name is Eric sir, why do you keep calling me Rin?
Mysterious voice: Because that is your name. I guess I should explain myself, I Know your biological parents Rin, or should I say knew.
Eric: WHAT?! Expain yourself!
Mysterious voice: Patience young one, all will be explained. You arent who you think you are. As a matter of fact, none of you are.
Mysterious voice: (steps into the light) my name is....
Brandon: Your name isnt important, How are we not who we think we are old man?!
Oldman: Ok then. The four of you arent friends by coinscidence. You all have powers hidden deep within your being! With my help your powers can be unlocked. You four, among others are destined to be part of the INVINCIBLE MILENCHU FORCE!
Tyrell: Prove it.
Oldman: I will, if you are willing. Those of you who wish to take part in this, follow me...
(The oldman forms a huge portal and steps through it)
Eric: What do you think Tyrell?
Tyrell:I dunno
Brandon sad Thinks) What should I do?
John sad Jumps though) Of course Im going!
All: Let do it!
(We jump through.......)
To be continued tommorrow based on your comments. Tell me what you think so far.
 Crimzen Regret · Thu Aug 25, 2005 @ 09:00pm · 5 Comments |
